Must I Escape

Mind over matter

So they say

But feel this light

Has led me astray,

Behind it lies a darkness

I can not bare

But can I escape

Do I dare,

Fearing for my life

And what lies ahead

Fall to my knees

Head in hand

I feel a hot breeze,

Blowing a struggle

Against my soul

And don't know

I can any longer hold.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must escape.
"I can not bare
But can I escape
Do I dare,
Fearing for my life"
I like the energy and desire to find a escape route. The above lines I like. Direct and honest words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Michael G. Smith]

I was hoping the falling to your knees was in prayer. I have these same days, but when I converse with Him they disappear.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Michael

[Sami Khalil]

"I feel a hot breeze,

Blowing a struggle

Against my soul"
I feel a hot breeze of dark tones but of splendid poetic talent...Bravo...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[ANTO]

Your own personal light shines through this in spite of the dark overtones Tarry.
Fighter til the end
X

[Tarry Franck]

Yes indeed...I will continue the fight...thanks for understanding and for reviewing.

[Lover Of Words]

Dark but yet so amazing all together