Unfurl

On a moonlit night

I awakened to your touch

Beneath the stars

You brightened my life,

Your wonderful embrace

I found comfort

I felt safe,

I felt such warmth from you

And oh how good it is

To have a love so true,

You entered my world

Even turned dark to day

I bask in your sunlight

As I watch our love unfurl.

Reviews

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Sounds like you have found happiness! I can feel the love! Beautiful!

[Tarry Franck]

Yes I have and thank you for reviewing.

[Sami Khalil]

Beauty cascades through this one...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[ANTO]

This is gorgeous Tarry - truly what poetry was invented for ...
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[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much ANTO :) You made my day!

[ANTO]

Okay - I can lay claims to many things but I havent made the day - that was God
And if Im still here after that bolt of lightning strikes I'll say ..your very welcome Tarry
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[Lover Of Words]

This is so beautiful! Spectacular

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[Lover Of Words]

You are quite welcome!!!!

[shallimarRose]

Tarry this is beautiful... Watching love unfurl like delicate petals in the morning dew.. Beautifully expressed.. shallimarRose

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Shallimar

[luviva]

great for the blooming love romantics...
i bet i also need to find ma self one ehh..
only joking but... it's a
great poem and all in all a great read!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much luviva

[Frieda P]

Love that word 'unfurl'....and this poem says it all in a lovely way. Moon stars, comfort's embrace, sweet musings here Tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Frieda

[Frieda P]

Good to see you with stars in your eyes again my friend. :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda - it's been long overdue!

[Antoñyo]

Very nice...On a moonlit night these words felt like sunshine.

Thanks for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is a very romantic write, with a beautiful flow. Whomever this was written for is indeed lucky!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Sharon.