Depths Of Love

Like the wind beneath my wings

You lift my spirit so high

You can't even imagine

How that makes me feel

I feel like I can go to the depths

Of the sea

Climb the height of the sky,

You make me feel 

Like my life is precious

Like a gem

That you have polished and sealed,

A thrill I've never felt before

And it feels so good

Thankful for you

I am very sure.

Reviews

[Al R. Arce]

I'm sorry I couldn't get past the first verse. Unfortunatelly it is a very famous song! I don't think the song was your inspiration, but that verse is just too unique for you not to have thought about it. I do use songs as source of inspiration myself! Two of my pieces were influenced by songs: Fog - Moon over Bourbon Street by Sting. Free - I've got to be free by Queen. Yet unles I told you you would not pick it up! I guess wat I am saying is that sometimes, you find that someone else has written exactly what you want to say elsewhere. Take it in, sleep on it, and then let the uses transform it into something totally yours. Poems are too short. First impressions make them or break them.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Cemi

[Ohhhwillow]

Tarry! Initially I was skeptical about this - when I see love titles, my instinct is to be so! However you blew the cliche's out the water with this one. Love can only be describes as "a thrill", accurately so, the ups and downs are vast and very passionate. Anyway, keep up the lovely writes, this flowed greatly. :)

[Ohhhwillow]

Tarry! Initially I was skeptical about this - when I see love titles, my instinct is to be so! However you blew the cliche's out the water with this one. Love can only be describes as "a thrill", accurately so, the ups and downs are vast and very passionate. Anyway, keep up the lovely writes, this flowed greatly. :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Willow

[Mizo4]

nice write,
poetic, rythmic and well written :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Marion

[Lover Of Words]

The dephs of love and respect is shining brightly in your words. Breathtakingly beautiful.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear angel

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure my lovely aunt of mine... :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Like a gem

That you have polished and sealed,

A thrill I've never felt before"

Your writes are gems in the making...Bravo

[Tarry Franck]

You are so kind - thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)....................