Free Spirit

The majestic midnight cool breeze

Blows through my hair

Leaving in disarray

As others love to stare,

A free spirit I have become

And I think they may be jealous

Or who knows

They may be zealous,

However they may feel

My spirit will roam

For if it doesn't

Then I will have not grown

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

I am playing Devil's advocate here I guess by pointing out contradiction of a spirit which roams. This would meet the standard definition of having no direction and with no direction there is rarely any growth. I only point this because recently i've done some research on the real meaning of the reference of Free spirit. This a person who does not follow a path but is carried by feeling only usual what makes one feel good but not necessarily good for them. This phrase usually is synonymous with independence with the underlying meaning of following one's own independence and not that of Christ teachings. I just thought i'd share want I have learned.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for sharing Michael.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

I would prefer to regret something that I did, rather than regret something I never had the courage to try. Nicely done, Tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sharon

[luviva]

uhmm the first experience of freedom of youth or growing up. you capture the essence of the feeling so well...
nice roaming free spirit.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much luviva

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

What a nice journey, Tarry! :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Eddie Phillips]

Simple sweet and poignant tarry! thanks for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Eddie

[Lover Of Words]

This is amazing... the understanding of our ability to grow is something only we can figure out on our own.. The words are perfect... Love it... You have an amazing talent

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my angel

[Lover Of Words]

You are so welcome... The talent you have is nothing but magical.... Just like your heart

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure

[Sami Khalil]

This was good and refreshing...Always pleasurable to read your poems...:).................

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks Sami - always pleasurable to get a review from you :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...................

[Tarry Franck]

You are so kind :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)...........................

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. We must grow and sometime people we know won't understand. I like the journey and the wisdom in the end. We must expand and learn. Or become forgotten. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the excellent review Coyote