True Remarks

I dread today

With the thoughts of you

You haunt me with things of the past

Somehow I have to figure a way,

To break the chains

Build that wall

So that you don't enter

And want to remain,

What you want from me

I do not know

But you must set me free,

I'm tired of being in the dark

Not knowing your true intentions

Please let me know

Your true remarks.

Reviews

[Purbleazaleya]

It's those times in a relationships where we don't get them anymore and they refuse to share with us that bugs us the most. And we wander what the hell is going on and what we are supposed to do, but we're so lost, we just don't know what to say anymore

[Tarry Franck]

Exactly Purbleazaleya

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest and directness of the poetry.
"But you must set me free,
I'm tired of being in the dark"
Sometime separation is better than waiting for bad ending. Thank you dear friend for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

It can be hard when we don't know where a relationship is going...well written...

[Tarry Franck]

Yes it is Valerie

[Cory Barrett]

Painted in black, drinking a bottle of sorrow, riding on a carousel at the an empty park.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks for reviewing