Forever

Beneath the sun

Beneath the moon

I feel your light

You are a guiding light

And I can only wish we meet soon,

You're so bright and filled with such energy

I can sense from miles away

Your heartbeat moves so fast

I can feel it and I'm not even there

And mine moves the same

I miss you, my love

And I don't think that will ever change,

You are the light to my soul

And I admire one that touches me so deeply

From just over a phone,

I don't want to lose you

Don't let go

Of what we might have

Because it could be forever

That you and I could last.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I miss you, my love
And I don't think that will ever change,
You are the light to my soul"
Some people make us want to love. We will always need them. Above lines are powerful words for the emotion of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Hope you meet soon...I know the feeling...well written...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Valerie

[Purbleazaleya]

Awww, this was so sweet! This really made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Chris Atkinson]

I realy like this one Tarry, you write your emotions so well. I know exactly how you feel. great writing :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Chris