Giving in

Progress making
Start to improve
Somehow I still feel empty
Honest speaking
Getting it out
Something inside me's breaking

Constant waiting
Hopeful resolve
I just want this to be over
Patient loving
Playing this out
While I am going under

Daily burdens
Learn to survive
Emotions abound, overwhelming
Now to surrender
This sacrifice
Succumb to the dark inside me.

Reviews

[Curtis.Lenker]

This is great work. I have felt like this before and it is not pretty. Very well written.