Soulmate

I wanted to write this about my soul mate.

But i haven't met her yet.

I thought i did.

But it was only a deep love.

One so deep i still can't talk about it.

But she wasn't my soul mate.

A soul mate could never hurt you the way i was hurt.

Your pain is their pain.

And they wouldn't do that to themselves.

She destroyed me.

And when the pieces were finally put back together,

Their was a piece missing.

Maybe gone forever.

I don't know...

Maybe my soul mate has it.

And when i find her i will be whole again.

Reviews

[MelissaAndres]

I know SO many people can relate to this! You did an excellent job of portraying emotion and desire. Thankfully, I have found my soulmate and I know that you will too. I truly believe there is someone out there for everyone. Great job on the poem!

[terry smith]

Thank you...someday! :)

[MelissaAndres]

You're welcome! I know it is difficult to be patient but it will happen.

[Emma]

How long did it last? Where is she now?

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Absolutely, except for one spelling error which is superficial of me to point out I know I should kill myself by blindly running into oncoming traffic whatever we'll talk about it later, perfect.

[terry smith]

thanks for pointing out the mistake. I write things as they come to me.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Yap. I hear that.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

So deeply moving. I hope you find him/her.
It's what we all are searching for.

[wordman]

the pain of love,you cant experience love without feeling some pain,
but she will come ,so have fun looking