Lost love

I see you everywhere,

Although ...I know you're not there.

I can smell you,

hear you, 

feel you.

Even though you have been long gone,

and the only thing I have left,

is this picture in my mind.

So twisted from reality it would make Salvadore Dali proud.

I almost wish I could take it and crumple it up,

and throw it away...

almost.

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- powerfully poignant and sensitive poetry... the Dali reference is to die for... the closing is stunning... -- i can think of a lot many things that i almost don't want to think of...

[GreenShoes]

Nice one! Just one thing . . in the second line, your should be you're.

[terry smith]

Thanks ! the words are my strong suit ,not the grammar, so i can use all the help i can get.