Shallow waters

I dipped my middle finger

 in the shallow pool you call a soul

then flick tiny droplets of you 

against  the bedsheets

 where moments before

 we made love...

it froze

 instantly

 because you are a cold

 hearted b***h 

and I hate that I love you.

Reviews

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

" in the shallow pool you call a soul
then flick tiny droplets of you
against the bedsheets"

Beautiful imagery, I like the hint of murder captivated here thanks for sharing - ATC

[...]

Wow...intense! It sucks when we love someone that doesn't love you back. Very relatable, my dear poet

[B]

oh my
Hmmm
everyone is different
maybe she isnt like you
but she is like someone else
you are very honest
that is cool

[terry smith]

thanks,I try to be honest in what I write and feel :)

[B]

yeah
it shows
that is a golden quality never change

[terry smith]

Why thank you very much!!!! :D

[B]

Pleasure :)

[Indra Neil]

raw and powerful write! well composed!

[Cherry Pepperweb]

awesome poem.
Very relatable.
I hate when that happens, I seek a warmer soul now...

[Kelly Scheppers]

A little Joan Jett for the soul...your angst spoke volumes!

[mattavelli]

Ya, I like it. Youve displayed your shackles well.

[terry smith]

Thank you!!

[breaking_heart]

"I hate that I love you" so true! Beautiful poem!

[terry smith]

Thank you!!

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

This is my favorite poem of the day. Brilliantly wrote by a brilliant bloke. Fantastic

[terry smith]

Thank you JCC.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Extremely stark....raw and dark....but mostly honest....real and honest....nicely done.