Accidental Orgasm

I slipped on your smile

and fell backwards

into a pool of delectable serenity

Reviews

[B]

Bloody hilarious
now i am laughing like crazy lol
too funny

[Insight "MH"]

Small in size large in volume. Job well done, thank you for this fine piece
Insight.

[terry smith]

thanks for reading!

[....................]

ah,a wet and wild ride from the smile to that post-slip serenity...nicely done, my friend

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Man! I want to wrap up in those words are get cozy. This is a great example of less is more. Why try and fluff up a poem when the simpleness is so divine. I love this. I adore this. Bravo

[terry smith]

Big smile!:D Thank you!! yes fluff is that marshmallow stuff you get in a store...lol