Alice act one

death came a calling

climbed up the water spout

gonna get that Alice

knock that b***h right out

out came a gun

he fell oh what to do

..so Alice ground him up

and drew the needle from the spoon

...and flew off to the moon

 Alice....looked down at her arm

"tracks like footprints on my soul." she thought

...as the needle slid into her arm

like so many of her customers

it repulsed her till...

she could feel the rush of the white rabbit racing through her veins

her mind chasing after it emphatically till it got to the sweet spot..

.....ah

the land of nod.

Alice slumped against the wall

by the gutter

in the alley

and appeared to fall asleep.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

you seem to have quite extensive exposure to ladies of troubled pasts
Well

I guess with compassion and love
Everything can be so different
and i guess all these things you see
Are so private to that person ....... it must be nice to be able to help people

[~]

so skillfully written, a whole world of addiction on chemicals.. i volunteered for a few weeks on soup lines, in the streets of Bern seeing and hearing heartbreaking stories about whys and hows.

[terry smith]

Thanks! this is the beginning of my alice in wonderland story. :)

[~]

looking forward to the whole play :D