Rap

read like Busta Rhymes is rapping it

I

don't

want

a

ticky

tack

rat

a

tat

re

la

tion

ship

with

you

not

a

nic

nak

brick

a

brack

held

together

with

glue

once

in

a

while

just

for

a

smile

how

do

you

do

wham

bahm

thank

you

man

I

want

to

mean

more

than

that

to

you

....

so

if

you

wanna

I

say

if

you

wanna

do

you

wanna

give

it

all

to

me

'cause

you

know

I

wanna

yes

you

know

I

wanna

did

I

say

I

wanna

give

it

all

to

you

...

I

wanna

slip

and

slide

crash

and

glide

ride

the

tide

and

come

inside

flip

the

script

and

try

to

hide

my

fire

inside

of

you

and

if

you

say

you'll

do

these

things

I'll

give

all

of

me

to

you

Reviews

[....................]

have never been a fan of rap , but I like this...i like the Legend twist at the end :)

[terry smith]

I like the style just not the message most of the time, thanks for the read my friend! :)

[....................]

you are welcome :)

[Yours Truly]

I liked the way it flowed easy and your diction, very much enjoyed reading it. I'd like to hear what you come up with next.
And thank you for your kind review :)
-Yours Truly

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow for Attitude!
I could hear the music beating in the back of my mind.
Enjoyed this lovely rap very much!

[terry smith]

Thanks Jyoti! :D I like to do different things :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Great!
You are welcome.

[Gee]

Yo,yo,yo,grand master Tel,bustin' all over Wc.Get in my son,SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET !!!!

[terry smith]

Thanks...there is more to come this is not finished by any means.:)

[Gee]

Well,me and my hip hop,head spinning,back flipping crew are primed,ready for the next instalment.

[mattavelli]

Very romantic, Terry...:)