It's a wrap

I'm done with the sun,

it doesn't shine in my sky,

since you left me alone,

all alone here to die.

Reviews

[coffeedigest]

Simple, straight forward, and powerful. Well done! I really enjoy the simplicity in many of your pieces. Keep up the great work!

[terry smith]

Thanks simple is my style!

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yes, the colony of unrequited love...i spend weeks vacationing here...well-penned, my friend

[terry smith]

On my trip it rained every day.... :)

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funny...at my resort too :)

[terry smith]

contort the resort I say with a snort , and simply walked away! :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Such times do come, but then we need to shine for ourselves.
Loved the rhyming and style very much.
Very well done!

[terry smith]

ah to shine from within, shed our skin, forgive the sin and begin again....:)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh maybe yes, poet Terry!

[Gee]

Oh ,dark days under the cloud of love lost.Nicely done Terry