Apple Pie

So...

I made a pie

the other day

and I was a little low

on the normal ingredients

so I just kind'a fudged it

and added something...

by mistake.

got a phone call

while working the crust

and ended up

with the best freak'in pie ever

it was so good 

I couldn't help myself

I ate it all

now there is no proof

of the best pie ever

or even

a way

to reproduce it.

Reviews

[B]

Lol
I do that alot lol
I am not allowed to bake no more lol

[Beccy]

Don't you ever dare tell a girl you're hugging her dough! :-))

[terry smith]

laughing my A@# off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

[Beccy]

Yup, so it is, so those sweet kisses I mentioned are the most important ingredient are they not. :-))

Beccy.

[terry smith]

and the way you hug the dough:)

[Beccy]

Slavishly following a recipe is a bit like paying attention only to form when writing a poem. Both may well turn out 'perfect', but sometimes, as with life, a little off kilter produces far more interesting results.

Just keep on slinging those ingredients in any old way you choose, sweet kisses especially, the magic is bound to happen again.

Beccy.

[terry smith]

:) this is actually a poem about love :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's like that for me with a lot of things...especially electronics, computers etc. i sometimes find a way there, not doing it the normal way , but getting there...and in the end...i could never do it the same way again...

but really....aren't accidents often the best ever...

like with poetry....my method is just start with an idea and let it get there by itself...formulas seldom work...love is the same way...can't follow directions, just feel our way there.

[terry smith]

Thanks, I agree!!! nice to see you Jacob:)

[Roland Petrov]

I kind of doubt that this is a poem; it reads as prose. I like the story, though. No comma necessary after "low" and "it", but punctuation is needed after "ever", "myself" and "all". Funny how you peppered the first part with too much punctuation and then left out almost all the punctuation in the second half!

[terry smith]

Yeah ...it's actually about losing love!

[Roland Petrov]

Now you've ruined it for me! There isn't a real apple pie?