Tides

Endlessly 

ebbing

on tides

 that 

retreat

tease 

when 

they come

 forward

not 

quite

 touching

 my feet

Reviews

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I love the diversity these words . So many emotions underneath. Awesome, Terry!

[Relic]

A nice image to think about.

[andrew mitchell]

liked this, has many facets this write relating to nature, love, friendship and goals all which can be close but out of reach.

[Zugzwang]

Very evocative and mysterious. What is this poem about? Could it be a lady? Or perhaps something less tangible, like the muse? I like the ambiguous nature of this metaphor.

[terry smith]

it is about what ever in life treats you that way.

[Zugzwang]

That's even better.