Halloween yah

Sung to the tune "HALLALUJAH"

In the land of all hallows eve

the children dress in make believe

this is the story

let me tell it to you

It goes like this

it's not a myth

the grown-ups all give out

candy as gifts

and all the children cry out

halloween yeah

trick or treat yeah

smell my feet yeah

trick or treat yeah

now give us some candy

her scars were long

but she needed proof

that she was dead

so from the roof

she hung herself

in the moonlight

to amuse you

you untied her

but were unaware

was all a trick

for you to be scared

and from her lips you heard the

BOO yeah

halloween yeah

trick or treat yeah

smell my feet yeah

now give us some candy

I know that we were here before

there's only stale candy behind that door

and apples for me and you

now let's all go on a desperate march

to fill our bags with candy and such

and stuff our bellies

till they burst in two yeah

halloween yeah

trick or treat yeah

don't be mean yeah

share your candy

Reviews

[modtoddinc]

A fun and timely read. Thanks for sharing.

Peace, Todd

[andrew mitchell]

Brilliant Terry. So well written, the flow, the story so entertaining. GOLD it is!

[Emily]

Love it
Perfect for Halloween!
Well done!

[zaisham9393]

This is amazind terry loved it :P

[Terry O'Leary]

Colorful... yeah...
Psyco-delic even...
Enchanting!

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

i cant help but say it's got that thing, that unnamed thing that makes a great poem. you are as always on your game. thanks terry

[Robert]

Terry this flowed well and it was fitting for the time. Reminded me when I was a kid and how exciting Halloween was.

[Gee]

Very clever Terry and fitting for this time of the year..Extremely well done

[Julie Fran]

I love that it was very childish and also very serious and ominous. It really brought out the Halloween spirit. :) Awesome.

[Anika]

Wooow I loved this writing and how it flows very well
I love the song Hallelujah

Great work!