Just saying...

The rain kept falling down

they said there would be sunshine

but it's nowhere to be found

my head is in the clouds

and my feet are on the ground

just saying...

as I walk these empty streets

 all alone

thoughts of you and me

your'e my home

and if ever we shall be

I will know

that everything would be 

complete

just saying....

I sit here watching the rain outside

stumbling on my foolish pride

you said that you had never lied...to me

but I could see the spark had died

every time I looked into your eyes

I just couldn't realize....your'e free

of me

just saying....

just saying....

just saying....

Reviews

[B]

Too much romance
she has the other side of your feelings
a mirror image

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Awesome! I really like the picture and theme it painted. You have a great talent for wordsmithery :)

[terry smith]

Thanks!! working on turning it into a song:)

[Emily]

Great wording!
Keep on writing!

[Terry O'Leary]

Evocative!!!
Just saying...
;-))

[Gee]

When love dies eh,heartbreaker,ego smashing,but nowt you can follow about it.Lovely write Terry

[Kelly Scheppers]

Love sometimes tosses us away like the wrapper to a Hershey bar. It's sad and humiliating, and heartbreaking all at once.

Would a hug help?


(((redeemable for a hug)))

[GreenShoes]

You spelled you're, "your'e." Aside from that, an enjoyable poem. :)

[Zugzwang]

Yep...been there!
Eloquently outlined. Thanks for sharing.

[Relic]

Life sucks that way sometimes. The spark dies and we can't reignite it no matter how hard we try.

[terry smith]

You cannot build a fire from ash...

[Relic]

No you can't, good point.

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Awesome, Terry :) I have one titled exactly the same hahahaha

[terry smith]

Thanks! I know I read it!:)