Message to you

I picked up the phone

to call you

set it down again

and went back to bed

I hit the road

guitar case in hand

the only suitcase I need

to travel foreign land

I pick up a postcard

to send to you

then I tear it up again

leaving the words in my head

you

were the light in my sky

the night in my lie

the jam I would spread

the name I would dread

you

somehow could whisper my name

tearing down all my walls

I have no one to blame

I start a letter

and my pen runs dry

as I wipe a tear from my eye

I know it's all for the better

no postage to send

our story comes to an end

you

were the light in my eye

the nights we would lie

the love that we spread

now forever dead

you

somehow could give me a glance

and I would forget

'cept for the romance

you

were the love of my life

and now I must go

on with my strife

Reviews

[B]

I love you ....... so much

[terry smith]

so you are saying I have beautiful letters?:)

[B]

i guess
i dont know
where that came from

[terry smith]

the words make you feel good it is o.k.

[B]

how did you know that

[terry smith]

i told you I understand you :)

[B]

why do you understand me

[terry smith]

you area girl far from home, and love things that make you comfortable :)

[B]

i do
i hate discomfort
i cant even tolerate it for one hour

[terry smith]

well if I can make you comfy please read and message me as much as you want...look at me as your north american ambassador :)

[B]

lol
yeah ....................

[Elizabeth]

This is very much like a song. I see it played out in a sepia toned video... well done

[terry smith]

It is the lyrics to a song I am working on :)

[andrew mitchell]

Of the pain travelled thro your heart what a raw enjoyable write Terry..like a song.