Pyromance

I started a fire

from within my desire

and kindled a flame

by speaking your name

now the sky is ablaze

a rainbowed haze

you can see it on nights

void of pale moonlight

spread throughout the horizon

as far away

as you are

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, powerful poem about a really intense love..."come on baby, light my fire" (morrison)

"try to set the night on fire"

[terry smith]

Thanks Jacob:)

[B]

Very very beautiful .............

[terry smith]

it is a monkee scratching in the sand

[B]

lol ...... lol

[andrew mitchell]

The imagery lights up the sky in this write Terry. Nicely done!