Love Poem

I wanted to write you a love poem

then I realized I don't know you

I want to love you

but what I really want

is to ride you like the wind

over the miles and through the day

till the winds die down

and in your oasis we'd lay

and I would bathe in your beauty

wash my soul clean

that is the poem

that I meant 

to write.

Reviews

[B]

If only there was a man who really could do this

[terry smith]

:).............

[B]

Most guys suck
they just wait until you get fed up
and wanna just throw something at tthem lol
seriously

[terry smith]

maybe I am the last of a dying breed....when I am with someone I care for they are all that I need:)

[B]

surrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
and you wait forever until she gets fed u[
read moresurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
and you wait forever until she gets fed u[
and starts acting crazy
then you go why is she so crazy
hmmmmmmm you ......
lol

[terry smith]

no I am one of those that gets left not the one leaving....

[B]

surrrrrrrrrrrrrrre lol

[Satan]

Nis you have clearly had some dickhead boyfriends in the past. Relationships are phases and they will last as long as they should.

[B]

no hes not that
hes a good person
no its not like this

[Satan]

Okay my dear, if you say so.

[Veronique]

Terry my friend this is a most intimate and and tender write from the heart and soul as you share your thoughts with all to see about this woman...the way she she makes you feel deeply almost as you love her but uncertain and yet you want to share the closeness and intimacy with her a bonding ...knowing the very essence of her soul mingling with your own as two lovers would share as their bodies make sweet love.Very lovely write darlin'!