Rattle and Shake

The skeletons in my closet

rattle like wind chimes

in the santa ana breeze...

slowly driving me insane

Reviews

[B]

Our secrets cant be contained
eventually they make too much noise

[Chris]

I wrote my own answer to this one way back... it's called "Sanity..."

[terry smith]

yes, but sometimes the cost of sanity is like cleaning with comet,you forget where the dirt came from.

[Chris]

Comet Hale-Bopp won't be back in my lifeline...

[terry smith]

maybe your reincarnated self will see it and have a little deja vu!

[Chris]

"nam myoho regne kyo"

[terry smith]

ah the tao of Chris:)

[~]

Do they sell it with soy milk? :D

[terry smith]

no, only almond! ;D but you do get a free jellyfish!lololololololol :D

[~]

ahh... jelly-jell-O :D

[terry smith]

now take this butter and pee-nut!! lololol :D

[~]

now.. if we get to the nuts and bolts of it, maybe i will eventually end up with a UTI lol

[terry smith]

I have one word for you cranberries.....get me some would you !! lolololol :D

[~]

lol .. none over here.. the heat might have dried them up :D

[terry smith]

along with that tomato I threw at you!!! lolol :D

[~]

now, now.. that is not a nut... what has happened to you while I was gone? tsk tsk

[terry smith]

no but it is a fruit and I added nuts to my fruit salad!! :D

[underthemask]

I like this. Our secrets keep us sick.
Honestly I don't know what it is about this poem that I like so much. Its honest, short and something I can understand and relate to from my core. I always enjoy your work but there is something about this one that speaks to me and I am not sure why.

[terry smith]

Maybe your wind chimes give off a more pleasant sound than mine :) Thanks for the compliment!!

[underthemask]

More like the endless screams of memories I have tried to bury.

[terry smith]

maybe if we played our chimes together they would cancel each other out and we could have silence.