Hooked on a feeling

just follow me

into my warm embrace

and I will take you

to that beautiful place

so i delved into

her arms again

for a love that

had never been

and found a peace 

i only knew

when you were

in me

and 

i

you

Reviews

[Briana Noël Manzan..]

Great form; I love how the lines taper at the end!

[terry smith]

Thanks for checking it out! :)

[Riley]

this touched my heart and warmed it in ways i didn't know it could be, beautiful work. tears welled up in my eyes as i type

[terry smith]

glad I could touch you in that way...:)

[Riley]

darling your always welcome to touch me, in any way :)

[Riley]

that came out a little different than i had planned but oh well ha ha ha

[terry smith]

lololololol touch....touch...touch....:)

[Veronique]

Very gentle and soft your hearts words Terry...I very much enjoyed this tender write of yours...:)

[terry smith]

Thank you! :D

[Veronique]

My pleasure...:)

[B]

Stunning
Love is gorgeous

[terry smith]

Thank you!! :)

[B]

you were in me an i in you

[terry smith]

:)).............

[B]

I felt happy when i read this

[terry smith]

That makes me smile!! :)

[B]

me too
I am smiling :)

[B]

Please write sometthing
i need more
write another one

[Zugzwang]

Beautiful piece here, and I like the form too! Ahh, such a beautiful mistress, I'm envious!