Entrails

I touched 

you

as softly

as I

could

and 

your

response

was

to

swallow

me

whole

leaving

only

bones

and

entrails

for

the

buzzards

to

feed

upon

and

as

they

gorged

themselves

I

was

o.k.

at

least

I 

could

make

someone

happy.

Reviews

[B]

you have this secret desire
to be with someone that has that much passion about her
that if things didnt go well
she would metaphorically devour you
and then feel happy

and you wouldnt mind it
because you just want her to be happy

[Quill]

damn, that's a weird way to conclude a bad situation, seems pretty sad though, at least i liked it, nicely written