The Stars

The stars

peek out

in the night sky

one by one

like 

a shy child

in their mothers arms

just to 

get a chance

to gaze

upon you.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

SSo stunning beyond words

[NinjaShadowWolf]

I love stars and I love the personification you used for the stars.

[terry smith]

thank you!!!

[annalysiar]

Very nice symbolism. Great write

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice use of the stars to portray the feeling that he is peeking at her from behind his shyness....

j.

really enjoy your writing, Terry.

[terry smith]

thank you Jacob it means a lot !

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww...Terry, how adorable :)

[B]

i am glad you feel this way

[Calamityofgin]

Awwwe! This is the sweetest, prettiest thing..love tjis tjought T. Love you baby.

Always
Jennifer