Just thought you should know....

Just thought you should know....

A Poem by terry smith

...while you lay sleeping...
with my fingertips
I read the story of you..
every scar
 imperfection
and razor line....
like railroad tracks
that lead
to nowhere
...every needle mark
and stretch mark
from the child 
you never had...
 
...and I sit here
in wondrous
amazement...
in the beauty
of the story
that is
you

© 2015 terry smith


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Admiring a woman through her worst
now that is love
seeing her imperfections

beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


terry smith

9 Years Ago

seeing her :)
Nisreen

9 Years Ago

A good friend you are ..... wish you all the best
Oh sweetheart. To love through scars and imperfection, find poetry there. I love you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very sweet and sensitive, a beautiful expression of tenderness.

Posted 10 Years Ago


If only all men were as sweet and loving and sensitive as you Terry my darlin' friend...such a lovely write your heart has shared.Beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


terry smith

10 Years Ago

thank you...see i am not all sadness :)
Veronique

10 Years Ago

lol...I'm so glad to see that your not Terry...;)
terry smith

10 Years Ago

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This is very touching :) Awesome thing to say, Terry

Posted 10 Years Ago


terry smith

10 Years Ago

when you love someone you love all of them scars included...it's what makes them them
...

10 Years Ago

very true :)

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Books by Terry Smith Bathroom Graffiti Angel Vomit Sid & Mary (Opal ) a journey into the wasteland available on Amazon Happily Married more..