I saw the sunrise this morning

You walk

into the

sunrise

and 

it 

parts

to make

way

so

as

not

to

distract

from

your

beauty

creating

a

rainbow

in

your

honor

Reviews

[Calamityofgin]

Baby thank you for saying hello during that sunrise. You make my mornings cozy...and wrapped im you


Love lovelove lover
Jen

[annalysiar]

Very nice format. Great word usage. Beautiful poem

[terry smith]

thanks!!..........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you do these so well...the unfolding as one word follows another line by line...walking into the rainbow....creating a clear sunrise.

[terry smith]

you are too kind sir!! thanks for the compliment!

[B]

Waw
romantic
please write more