I am the night

I am not

the rays of the sun

nor the sky

I am the night

the moonlight

and i awaite

alone

without even

my shadow

to accompany 

me

and i

hunger

Reviews

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-- wow... -- it's tough to bring out this shade of isolation in such few words...

[terry smith]

Thank you :) it is always nice to hear from you!

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-- my privilege, monsieur... it's always nice to visit your universe of verse... :)

[terry smith]

ha ha ha !!:)

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-- huh ? ... you don't like the expression "universe of verse" ? ...

[terry smith]

no i love it...just that you said it is your privilege....like i am worthy of that:)

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-- oh... you don't know it's a privilege to read ya? ... hmmm... i smell low self-esteem...

[terry smith]

...no thats my toast burning....lolol

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-- you are prolific and profound... that's why it's a privilege to read ya... :)

[terry smith]

thank you so much Serah!!!:)

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-- you're welcome... -- i just have terrible time constraints because of career issues else i'd read all that you post... i do read more than i'm able to comment upon...

[terry smith]

I have over 400 it would take you a while....glad you like my writing :)

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-- yeah... i am trying to build a career that gives me the luxury of time... maybe i get lucky... -- and, i do like your writing... both poetry and prose...

[terry smith]

thank you:)

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-- my privilege... and don't laugh this time or i'll get frightened about my english again... :p

[terry smith]

no your english is very good!!:)

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-- as if i believe you... lol... :p