Birds of a feather

I watched a school of fish

flying in the ocean

on wings of gills

towards the dawn

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- only a truly talented poet could make fish fly on the wings of his words... :p

[terry smith]

when you find them let me know and we can all go fishing together :)

[. serah .]

-- hahahaha... now that's what i call a party... :p

[terry smith]

we shall pack a picnic basket

[. serah .]

-- will it have chocolate chip cookies...? (is the most important food question ever) :p

[terry smith]

yes !!! that is all i plan to put in it...lol

[. serah .]

-- awesome... that's all i've ever cared about... :p

[terry smith]

before today is done i need to write you a poem about chocolate chip cookies :)

[. serah .]

-- wow... that would be awesome... :D

[Sophia]

I loved this. Like a fraction of a fairytale.

[terry smith]

thank you :)

[J3ssInJupit3r]

Simple. Short. But says so much. I have never really thought of fish as flying through the ocean. I liked your perspective on this. Makes for a beautiful poem. I loved it. Thank you for sharing!

[terry smith]

thanks for reading glad you liked it!