One last time

Going through a s****y point in my relationship...

 

Please kiss me one last time
So my final memory of you
Will not reflect the pain
I have been put through
Please hold my hand
So I can always remember
The feeling of your callused hands
Gently holding mine
Please keep my picture close
So I know you’ll remember
That smile in printed ink
Instead of the tears on my cheeks
Please never forget
All the laughter and the tickle fights
Lying in each other’s arms
Or staying up watching movies all night
Please tell me you love me
Just one more time, into the recorder
So I can replay it millions of times
So that part of you will still be mine

Reviews

[A.Lee]

So beautiful and sad. You capture emotion very well...

[melissa]

wow that was beautiful:)

[Coyote Poetry]

So sad and beautiful. We reach for one last memory. In the end the memories become less painful. Description of desire and need for one last feeling of emotion powerful and strong in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Wolfe Greytome]

This is a great piece. While your wistful pain is quite apparent, their seems to be a subtle anger lying just below the surface of the words. Very Well Done!