How Many Tears

How many tears must be shed

Til no more hearts are broken

How many times must we yell and scream

Til no more lies are spoken

How many tears must be shed

Til we dont cry no more

I guess theres no one answer

Cause we arnt really sure

Our heart starts to break

And the cacking sounds like thuder

I havnt got an answer

So i continue to wonder

How many times must my heart hurt

How much blood must it have bled

Til we arnt sad no more

And no more tears are shed

 

Reviews

[Tiffany]

struggling to comprehend the deep in the tradition of this art we share. Thank you. t.

[Simone]

Great job- deep. I loved this poem, your style, your words. It was amazing

[D J K March]

I liked this poem, most good poems grab several images and through them at you so you become overwhelmed in emotion. This poem however focused on just a single thing, but that made it consistent and powerful.
Nice work.

[Manie]

Does any of us really know? Nice poem. One can really sense the heartbreak, sadness and frustration in this poem.

[deeps]

Such a sad but yet hopeful write in a way.
Leaves room for a turn around maybe.
Very well written and I enjoyed the flow of your write.
This could easily be made into a song.