For She Is The Reason.

a girl with true beauty

is the one near me

she gives me shivers of excite

and she is a true delight.

for a crazy reason unknown

she is bring me back home

I am becoming myself once again in the light

and it happens so quick I am ready to become a new sight.

just look at me now

and question to yourself how

how am i this new person

well i am better for she is the reason.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I really like this one and I agree it seems like you're letting your readers access your private thoughts. It's interesting throughout the poem, and leaves the reader wanting to know who's the girl that's the reason for the new you. But it's always good to leave it open ended for them to guess on their own. I'd have to say that this is my favorite of yours! Great job! :D


Ashley Rivers--your friend ;)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very cool :) that's a nice poem

[Alex Vidmar]

i like this one.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

This is so close to the heart, It's amazing that you could write this so perfectly.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly personal front to a mytery of sorts, well done, good read.

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I am curious who she is :o I really liked it nice write Taya :3

[MoriartyMesa]

I felt this was very personal, almost feel like i accidentally read someone's private thoughts.