Something That Was Once Loved So Dear

something that was once loved so dear

held so close now isn't there

i do not feel it in my heart

when it had been there in the start.

to quit or continue to lie

does it make a difference for when i am have died

or will it still be nothing 

when it had meant almost everything.

am i to just sit and pretend

to act like i'm still in

or to just let go

that way everyone will know.

the pain i resieve from this

takes an eternity to miss

or not to see to the bare eye

for it is plain to see all the signs why.

Reviews

[Finally Fallen]

very nice write tay u have an error tho in the second stanza second line it should read "does it make a difference for when i have died" i think let me know if i am wrong tho anyways ur a talented writer keep it up