She Is Who?

She tried it,

She doesn't think her life is worth s**t,

So she tries again,

She takes the knife and opens it,

She thinks she is ready for it,

She brings the blade to her throat,

She feels so alone,

She pushes down,

A million thoughts crossing her mind,

She crosses her throat with the blade,

but without pressure...

She is up against the wall,

Hands gripping her throat,

Ready to end it all,

She squeezes as hard as she can,

She falls feeling herself starting to part...

She is sitting on her bed,

Still wanting to be dead,

so she tries again...

She thinks no one will miss her,

She feels the urges,

Once she's doing it she is not strong enough,

For she is weak,

and her future is blurring, and is bleak...

In a single 24 hour,

5 attempts on a life,

each closer...

When will it be too close?

For her to finish herself,

She already hates herself, says she deserves to go to hell,

A tear will come to someone,

When they realize who...

Reviews

[Your Perfect Disaster]

This is so sad :( And now i'm really concerned. IT was EXTREMELY well written and I could follow everything perfectly but the lack of self-worth and the constant hovering thought of suicide it rather depressing. I'm here if u need a friend you know, just one phone call away.

[SheActsLikeSummer]

This was really emotional. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I have a few poems kind of like this myself *hint hint, wink wink, nudge nudge*. Very well done, you did a wonderful job.

[The Analog Kid]

Hopefully this is about someone else and not autobiographical. Someone your age on this site actually did succeed at this act very recently. On the other hand, it sometimes helps to just put feelings down in words.

[luna11]

Hi
This is a great poem. It felt like I was standing there, watching her try to kill herself.
Suicide is bad. Don't do it. Ever. When I want an escape, I write.
But the poem is brilliant. Suicide is not!
Well done :D
xx