Just A Distant Place

never understanding you,

never close to what you want to do,

or who you want to be,

someone you hate to see.

when you look in the mirror do you smile,

or frown and cry for a little while,

do you like the image you see,

or do you wish to be a different somebody.

in such a small town with such big dreams,

you have all the right means,

all you want is so far away,

just a distant place.

Reviews

[SheActsLikeSummer]

Excellent. This was really, really, really good. Although some of the rhyme sounded forced, but most of it flowed wonderfully. Beautiful piece, I loved it.