priya rosario

i wrote this for mythology about creating are own god or goddess and i choose a goddess.

Priya Rosario is the daughter of aman a ruler of satara India. The first sight of the flowery garden. She asked her dad to make them hers at a very young age she was more beautiful than anyone could have imagined. She wears a green sari with head covering. She started to sing songs that no one had herd of and the flowers seemed to dance with the music. As she got older and was more womanly her father set out to help some warriors and he came back very sick and he passed away leaving satara to her. Afraid of the lands out there she stuck herself away never leaving satara. She remained singing blessings to the flowers as she picked them and carried them back to her little house on the hill. She’d then boil some water and put her flowers in a bowel and chant as she mashed them with her beautiful voice spreading all over the village. Many people came to see her for she wouldn’t leave satara. Many came bringing their wounded for her to heal them. Many woman and men came to her for her help to be beautiful or attractive. Her potions aren’t able to heal the dead they must come to her alive or her potions won’t work. Her eye site is so good that she can see people coming many for many miles. Marco a man of Mumbai India herd about priya and came to ask for her hand in marriage. Priya turned him down and he grew avid at her and cursed her. He caused her blindness so she could no longer see people coming to her for help at night. Priya took this curse as a gift from god and this angered Marco more than ever. Then with his curse he added another by taking her voice away at night so she couldn’t make potions. With that he felt he had accomplished his goal and soon asked her again to have only fallen for another. Many women feared her because she was so beautiful. Her father motivates her to help other so they won’t end up like her father did.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I wanted to read more. I loved the way you wrote this tale. He took her vision and voice. She still had the power to heal? I like the flow of the story. This is a amazing story. A strong ending to a outstanding story.
Coyote

[Rene Velez]

beautiful story, great images...

[sivan]

iNTERESTING STORY. nICE ENDING

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A most lovely story, Enjoyed the read, wonderful imagery and detail.