Losing it

The fire burns my eyes,

but I’m-

mesmerized

The world is spinning!

The world is spinning!

I felt it for the first time.

I’m losing my mind-

a need to internalize.

I heard the people around me

they all made perfect sense,

we sat around,

hanging out with trees and sand. 

but something switched

and my thoughts became scrambled

it left me speechless

unable to handle.

swirling

spinning

singing

staring

it’s time to clean house!

it’s time to clean house!

My heart and home are

forever bond. 

Reviews

[diamonddave75]

Taylor, this is a beautiful write.. you're a very gifted writer.. Thanks for sharing.. Dave

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Subtle Way Of Expressing This Subject. Good Work Maam.

[Justin]

that was really great :) :) :) it is set up really cool; u are able to capture how a home is to someone great job :)