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There's a castle in my head,

where everyone's always ballroom dancing.

They wear masks so I don't remember who they are

There's an ocean in my heart,

where everyone goes to drown,

or turn into sharks that tear me apart

There's a ghost in my mouth,

where it jumbles my words,

and tongue-ties me for fun.

There's a coffee shop downtown,

and I go there to clear my head,

but it never works.

You're always lingering.

Reviews

[Allendorker]

This is beautiful.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Very creative! I really love this piece. All the different references were great.

[Carrigan]

Beautiful, I love how you changed it - yet still kept the same word style. I think you've found a good tempo for yourself!

[Acropolix]

I like the constant shift in emotions, certainly suprised me. The end of the poem is really good. Creative piece! Keep it up!

[Kelsey]

Lovely.