I want to be the one who...

I want to be the one who is going to wait a million years... for you.

I want to be the one who gets to see that cute grin you use when you look at me…every single day.

I want to be that one who laughs at your jokes…smiles at your embrace…and blushes at your existence.

I want to be the one who is always there for you…no matter the situation.

I want to be the one whose hand you hold and say…'This is my girl.'

I want to be the one who makes you nervous, blush, and anxious all at the same time…the way you make me feel.

I want to be the one who  has aching legs from running through your mind...all day.

I want  to be the one whose heart beats fast and slow at the same time…because of you.

I want to be the one who gets lost in your eyes…the one who can't breathe when you kiss them.

I want to be the one who can say, 'I'm addicted to you…' because you are my drug…the only one I want.

I want to be the one who makes you the happiest you've ever been…

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love how sweet and romantic this is..... it has such emotion and such strong meaning.
I love it, such a full of love kinda peace.
It deserved a place in my contest so well done :)

[GamingGal]

Pros: It conveys a feeling of longing, which I like. Conveying emotions is good. And I like the repetition of "I want to be the one"

Cons: Not much of a con, just that I'm left wondering if the girl got what she wanted in the end. I assume she did.

Overall: This is a good poem, one I'm sure many of us can relate to. I know I can.

[gage_tapia]

i like this one :)