Pain

 

You tell me it will be okay?
It was all a lie.
You don’t know what I'm feeling.
You don't know what okay is.
You could never understand these feelings that are going through my mind.
That goes through my body.  
You don't know me.
You won’t ever touch me again.
Not my body.
And NOT my mind.
Not now.
Not EVER!

Reviews

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is so full of pain and disillusionment. That is hard to deal with I'm sure but remember God never
lets us down. This is a good write even though it comes from pain. Wonderful.
Debby

[Helen Woodward]

Well that sounds definate and final!! Good piece Thomas, well written, obviously heart-felt emotions coming into play here...good for you!
Cheers,
Helen.

[Jeff "jazzman"..]

Powerful, and heartfelt, i could feel the pain and the anger in this piece clearly.
In matters of the heart, I have a scripture that I stand on in times like this:
"Weeping may indure for a night, but joy comes in the morning"...Keep you head up, I'm sorry you had to go through this ordeal.. Remember Isaiah 54: verse 17.....

[O!]

WOW!!!

this is so STRONG in its sadness.........

not many can say what u just did......they keep going back and it starts all over again!...

I love how straightforward u are in this piece.

and i love the line
You could never understand these feelings that are going through my MIND!!!.......u show that even though ure trying not to Think with ur heart at a time like this....even ur mind Feels!!.....LOVE IT!!

sorry about ur pain! :-(

THank you for sharing.

O!