Every Night

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night

Reviews

[Serendipity Planet]

I adore short poetry , its the best :)
made me think , what would be the rest , what happened just before you wrote those words

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
But you gone?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
and days

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
I hate it so much?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
but I can't?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
Shame?

[Talia]

Before? All those questions and more
Glad you enjoyed!

[AJW]

I miss that kind of love. Great poem I really enjoyed it.

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

short and to the point, like this one

[Talia]

Thank you for reading!

[Scarlet]

I feel this way about someone. This sounds so sweet even though there isn't much content there. Great job.

[Talia]

Thank you!

[Laura Kate]

It is honest, and direct, which I like.
Nicely done.

[Talia]

Thanks for reading!

[emipoemi]

It's a feat to write a haiku that rhymes and flows at the same time. Sweetly cheesy, but utterly brilliant! Well done!

[Talia]

Thank you!

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.