I'm Falling

Can you catch me?
I feel like I'm falling
Faster than ever before
My feet have failed me
Come here my darling
You are all I adore

Go ahead and pinch me
Cause I must be dreaming
I think I'm out of my mind
Do my eyes deceive me?
Your smile is gleaming
So lovely and so kind

Will you hold me?
As tight as you can?
I could almost feel
Your arms around me
I can't wait for this to be real
You're a one in a million man

Lean in and kiss me
my heart skips a beat
You're utterly unpredictable
But that's alright with me
Your words are so sweet
With a voice that's irresistible

Tell me you love me
The best feeling in the world
You're the cutest thing
Knowing that you love me
I am the luckiest girl
So listen to my heart sing

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

A great love poem. She went head over heels for sure. Great job!

[Talia]

Yes, she really did. Thank you!

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome!

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We dream for that one special one. Very nice!

[Talia]

Thanks for reading!

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At this poem I can see you don't have to be afraid from falling cause you got beautiful strong wings.

[Talia]

Well thank you!

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Well welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i wish we could lean in...will be a great day when that is possible again....a romantic and hopeful write.
we need more of this today...everything is about sadness or fear.
j.

[Talia]

I agree the world is scary right now. We need to keep hope. Thanks for reading

[Mr. D]

*chuckle* such a naive outlook. You know nothing of people, and even less of their machinations. I wager that relying on someone to catch you has resulted in a lot of emotional scars. How many times did they catch you before? Better bring a parachute with you this time so that when you learn that no one has your back, you can catch yourself this time.

[Talia]

Well you would know scars since your heart has thorns around it lol

[Mr. D]

Nah, see, the thorns point outward. They stick and prod all who would get near. I know how people are. You would do well to learn it too. It keeps you safe.

[Talia]

I've learned that too

[Rye]

This is such a beautiful write.

[Talia]

Thank you!

[KeeD]

Hi Talia, this is such a beautiful way of expressing those innermost emotions of the heart. In every stanza I feel the flutters and it warms up my face. It's such a privilege to read someone who feels love and is able to express and share it with others, specially those who struggle with it. Great stuff

[Talia]

Hi KeeD, Im glad I could make you feel with this. And everybody has those struggles in life. Thank you

[emipoemi]

I have no words..... my voice is in my awe!!

[Talia]

So glad you enjoyed!!