Simple But Deep*

The temple was swarming with total excitement.

Eagerly, the scholars awaited

The young priest's Dharma talk--

A day long anticipated.

 

The nervous priest stood before

The sangha as varied as the songs of the birds--

From simple folk to top-notch scholars,

There to scrutinize all of his words.

 

With a quivering voice, he started out.

After he felt more self-confidence,

He spoke as one who demonstrated

Compassion, knowledge, and commonsense.

 

After the service, a group of scholars

Stood in a cluster off to the side

And criticized the young priest's talk

With words arrogant and snide.

 

"So typical of a novice," they said.

"Shallow ideas." "Trivial thoughts."

"I didn't find it moving at all."

"Choppy and uneven in spots."

 

An elderly man heard their complaints

And asked, "What was so unclear?

The young priest said the Buddha's name.

That was all I needed to hear."

 

With that, he silently walked away,

Leaving them with a message so brief.

Speechless, they stared at the wise myokonin**

With a mixture of awe and disbelief.

 

-by Bob B (9-9-18)

*Based on an old Buddhist anecdote

**In the Shin Buddhist tradition, pious followers whose simple words represent the depth of their faith

Reviews

[grimfukle]

I like this Bob. It speaks, to me anyway, that truth is never complicated.
Well done.