Bleeding

This is another of my poems that I wrote awhile ago.

I'm bleeding in the inside

Bleeding on the outside

Don't know what to do

With myself

Can't take it anymore

Wanting it to stop

Can't help myself

Feelings around me

Feelings inside me

Can't figure them out

All I know is I'm bleeding

No one seems to care

No one can see me bleeding

Author's Note

I'd like to know what you think.

Reviews

[lauren emily]

This is very emotional. The emotion in this is very..sad. It makes me feel really sorry for the narrator.
It's a really great piece, keep up the good work,
~Lauren