Dancing Silhouttes

Wondering moon, gazing lips, and starry eyes.

Does your heart race as fast as mine?

  When you hold me close on this marvelous dance floor,

Do you tremble like I do?

 I''ve become your captive

 I've Surrendered completely,

 Caress me with all your kisses,  

I'm waiting helplessly,

 Silhouettes embracing each other,

Singing beautys in every corner.

 We gaze into the night,

 Our grip tightening as the night gets younger.

 Drunken love swaying in the midst of our beautiful calamity.

Dreams of tomorrow whispers to us lightly.

Cupid's bow binds us, 

Such a beautiful work of art you and I.

Author's Note

Enjoy with love

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

Nice.... I tried moving the line "So kiss me all over I'm waiting helplessly, Silhouettes embracing each other" to after the line " Drunken love swaying in the midst of our beautiful calamity." Far be it for me to rearrange your thoughts but I am trying to be helpful. ( : O )

[La Luna]

Beautiful, I like the way this poem makes me feel, well down :)

[Everett DeValle]

Such beautiful symmetry with your poetic lines. Wonderful.

[Tena Luvs]

Thank you for the great comment =)

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Love shines through these sweet and loving words...Bravo....................

[Tena Luvs]

=0) thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............

[A. Amos]

Again a beautiful tale of love. good write and enjoyed the read

[Tena Luvs]

Thank you I appreciate your comments