The Sham

No spirit in me you feel, I guess,

A rapid grasshopper, which you wish to obsess…

But never delude yourself, seeming unconscious,  

The sham slips away, staying bumptious.

Reviews

[zainul]

Looks like stirring Rubaiyat!

[Mariam]

You felt it! I love Rubaiyat:)

[zainul]

Really,I was craving for Rubaiyat here
You have come as a surprise :)

[Mariam]

:)good to be a surprise

[zainul]

:)

[Holly Mason]

reads very interestingly
never delude yourself seeming unconscious-good line truly
I have read some of your other work I am enjoying it
it is written with a sense of get me through a few words or your loss*)
thank you so for sharing

[Mariam]

haha such a nice review from you,Holly)thank you for reading!

[Sami Khalil]

A unique write indeed using the grasshopper. An enjoyable one...:)

[Mariam]

hey who is here) Thanks you :)

[Sami Khalil]

The ever mysterious poet ...Hahaha

[Mariam]

right,with arabic melody :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Yes it is...And don't forget the magic carpet. I have one too...:)

[Mariam]

Aladin! I guess you have a friend Genie :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Pretty neat, I'd like to date a rapid grasshopper girl myself!

[Mariam]

ahaha:)thanks for reading

[Stacey Watts]

Nice rhyming and very well expressed. The flow of this is smooth. I really enjoy this read.

[Mariam]

I'm glad to know your opinion.Thanks:)