Avert the disaster

I saw circus elephants gather together, trumpet and cry,

Embracing my waist with long trunks,they wanted to pry

Whether I was fonder or kinder than their cruel master.

Poor animals thought cuddling a woman averted disaster…

Reviews

[francis]

its ok short and precise

[Mariam]

thanks for reading)

[francis]

for men it does u know

[Stacey Watts]

I love elephants such beautiful and gentle animals. Such a shame anyone would ever be cruel to them. Cuddling a woman I wonder, if it did give them security. Very beautiful here.

[Mariam]

Thanks for your kind heart and this review.

[lee von cleef]

Kipling, thoughts crowd your poem out of my head , but you put them there, long geen lim po po river all covered in fervor trees ? Yes thank you.

[Mariam]

Thanks for reading and your nice review) It also reminds me of Kipling's book.

[sithlordjp]

Beautiful... That always breaks my heart, seeing animals out of their elements, being badly treated for the amusement of spectators. You captures something special with these words, thank you for sharing.

[Mariam]

I agree with you.Thanks again for your nice review!