Bowed.

Hey, poor devil, who is lonely and proud

You dare think God revengefully vowed

To excise rancid lungs and oily tongues?

Felon sinner, get your broad back bowed.

Reviews

[Jayden Ireton]

Wow. What great imagery. Short and sweet. Thank you for a great poem.

[Mariam]

Thank you for reading)

[thewritingthespian]

Beautifully written.

[Mariam]

thank you for reading)

[sithlordjp]

Love the association of the "poor devil" with "God", made for a nice word play! The rythym is so tight and precise, a very controlled piece of writing, most impressive! Thank you for sharing!

[Mariam]

thanks for your nice review! :)