Petals

Tasting you slowly like sweet buckwheat honey,

Feeling your milk essence fragrant and gummy,

I breathe with temptation and beg to submit,

While kissing your lips-petals so dry and so neat.

Reviews

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Lovely Maria! Your words are like ancient honey and flowers of the future! I'm really a fan.

[Mariam]

we both serve beauty)thank you again

[thewritingthespian]

I've been reading a lot of your poems and you are very talented. I really like how with just a few words you create something so original and beautiful.

[Mariam]

very glad you like :) thank you so for reading and such a nice review

[Eddie Phillips]

The is a simple sweet nature to this poem. It is earnest and full of visual sentiment. I thought it was well done. Thank you for sharing your thoughts

[Mariam]

Thank you for reading :)

[Malcolmveli]

This poem has a good feel to it. I really enjoyed the simile and metaphors.
This poem has a good vibe to it that just feels good when you read it.

[Mariam]

Thanks for stopping by and your nice review)

[Malcolmveli]

you're welcome