Unbearable

It’s so unbearable to dream about your parable.

Wish our arable skins were spicy and wearable.

Life slips away through the gates of awaking lips,

Blips of kisses and blisses like false coins it flips.

Reviews

[brigid]

love the imagery in this poem mariam....also love the simplicity of your poems..they say it all...well done

[Mariam]

Thanks for stopping by.So glad that you like)

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

The rhyme scheme is genius, such an original poem!

[Mariam]

Thank you! :)

[thewritingthespian]

"Life slip's away through the gates of awaking lips". I love that line. Thank you for writing this! Can't wait for the next one.

[Mariam]

Glad that you like :)

[DaniElle LaPointe]

wow. Love it. wish it was exponential in length... didn't want it to end.... Thank you for sharing this one!

[Mariam]

thanks for reading and such a nice review :)